The purpose of this paper was to tell a story in my POV of overcoming an obstacle in my life as if it was happening right now. My intended audience was anyone who wanted to read it such as my peers, younger kids, adults, and even professors. Questions that I had asked myself while I was doing this assignment were “Did I do this correctly?”, “Is my professor going to like my story”, and “Should I really be writing about this?”. From this piece I learned that I can do a pretty good job a writing as if it is actually happening in present tense. My strength in this piece was showing how descriptive I could get in the piece. My weakness was not putting the right punctuation in the right spot throughout my sentences .his assignment gave me a clearer understanding about voice in writing.